一、英语书面表达 1.书面表达
难忘的初中生活即将结束。你们班计划举行“告别初中生活”的主题班会。假如你是班长,根据以下提示,用英语写一则通知。要点如下: 1. 时间:6月26日下午3:00. 2. 地点:六楼会议室 3. 活动内容:
1) 对老师用话语表达谢意;2)与同学交流自己的将来的梦想;3)师生合影,互赠留言等等。
参考词汇:look back at , say goodbye to, express thanks to , talk about, take photos.. 备注:词数100左右,通知开头已拟好,不计入总数。 Boys and girls,
The wonderful middle school life will go to the end._______________________ 【答案】Boys and girls,
The wonderful middle school life will go to the end. In the past three years, we have studied and stayed together. Looking back at the days we spend together, how sweet we feel. In order to keep the happy times in our hearts for ever, we are going to have a class meeting on the afternoon of June 26 next week. The theme of the class meeting is saying goodbye to our middle school life. It will be held in Conference Room on the Sixth Floor.
We are going to have some meaningful activities. To express thanks to our teachers, we each should say a thankful word to our dear teachers. We can chat freely with our classmates and teachers about our plans of the summer vacation. We can even talk about the dreams of our future. Then, we are going to take some photos with our teachers and classmates. In the end, we may give our wishes to each other. Don't be late! That's all. Thank you! 【解析】 【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少,如In order to,look back at,be going to,have a class meeting,say goodbye to,talk about,the dreams of,take some photos,in the end,each other,be late等。而复杂单句结构In order to keep the happy times in our hearts forever, we are going to have a class meeting on the afternoon of June 26 next week./ To express thanks to our teachers, we each should say a thankful word to our dear teachers.和Then, we are going to take some photos with our teachers and classmates.的运用,丰富了短文内容,使表达多样化,是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章表达更有逻辑性,也更富有条理。 【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英,也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维,考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以,考生不能遗漏要点,要
尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式,尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
2.书面表达
假设你是某英文报纸“Teenagers”栏目的编辑Betty,日前收到了Lucy的来信。她在信中诉说了她的烦恼,请你根据Lucy的来信,用英语写一封90词左右的回信。要求内容合理,信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Lucy,
I’m sorry to know that you aren’t allowed to read eBooks. _______________________________________ All the best! Betty
【答案】Dear Lucy,
I’m sorry to know that you aren’t allowed to read eBooks.
In recent years, electronic books, as a product of information technology, have gained more and more popularity. It is no doubt electronic books bring many benefits. For one thing, they are so convenient that we can read them anywhere and anytime. For another, their appearance will make paper-waste less.
However, as every coin has two sides, electronic books also have some disadvantages. For example, long time of reading e-books does harm to our eyes. And there are more radiation which is harmful to people's body.
In my opinion, E-book cannot take the place of traditional book, but it's an useful product. I think that e-books are beneficial if we read correctly and properly instead of reading over. All the best! Betty 【解析】 【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少,如in recent years,as a product of,live in,more and more,so…that,for example,do harm to,be harmful to,in my opinion,take the place of,instead of等。同时For one thing, / For another,/ However,等使短文的叙述很有条理,而It is no doubt electronic books bring many benefits./ they are so
convenient that we can read them anywhere and anytime. / And there are more radiation which is harmful to people's body.
/ I think that e-books are beneficial if we read correctly and properly instead of reading over.等复杂从句结构的运用,丰富了短文内容,使表达多样化,是本文的最大亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章表达更有逻辑性,也更富有条理。 【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英,也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维,考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以,考生不能遗漏要点,要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式,尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
3.书面表达
根据以下提示,写一篇介绍我的朋友张阳的短文。 基本情况 张阳,阳光中学九年级二班学生 1. 喜欢阅读。每周花七个多小时阅读各种类型的书,因为…… 兴趣爱好 2.喜欢观鸟。每年统计两次鸟儿的数量,以研究鸟儿在数量方面的变化。 优秀事迹 上个月把零花钱捐给了希望工程 1. 希望成为连接家乡到上海路段的高铁总工程师 2. 每个人为保护环境都可以做一些改变。如:…….(举1例) 未来梦想 要求:1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯; 2)必须包括表格中所有的相关信息,并适当发挥; 3)词数:100词左右(短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数); 4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 Zhang Yang is a student in Sunshine Middle School.
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【答案】Zhang Yang is a student in Sunshine Middle School. He is in Class 2,Grade 9. He likes
reading. He spends more than seven hours a week reading all kinds of books because he thinks reading is helpful. He enjoys watching birds. He counts the number of birds twice a year to study changes in the number of birds. He donated his pocket money to the Hope Project last month. His dream is to be the chief engineer of high-speed railway connecting my hometown to Shanghai. He hopes everyone can make some changes to protect the environment. We mustn’t throw rubbish everywhere. 【解析】 【详解】
亮点说明:这篇习作的层次清晰,内容饱满,表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语,例如like reading,more than,all kinds of,spend time doing,enjoy doing,the number of,twice a year,be the chief engineer of等。而He spends more than seven hours a week reading all kinds of books because he thinks reading is helpful./ He hopes everyone can make some changes to protect the environment.等多种复杂从句结构的综合运用,丰富了习作内容,使表达多样化,是本文的最大亮点。 【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英,也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维,考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以,考生不能遗漏要点,要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式,尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
4.今天手机在我们日常生活中已广泛使用。但中学生在学校是否应该持有手机,一些学生和老师有不同的观点。你们学校的校刊英文版正在就此举行征文活动,请根据下列表格提示的内容,用英语写一篇征文。
一些学生 一些老师 你的观点 观点 赞成拥有 反对拥有 理由 方便与家长联系; 有学生用手机玩游戏;有学生用手机作弊; 1. 2.
要求:
1. 表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;`
2. 必须包含表格所给的提示信息,并作适当发挥;
3. 词数:80-100词左右(征文的开头已给出,不计入总词数)。 Mobile phones have been used widely in our daily life
today._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】Mobile phones have been used widely in our daily life today. With the development of economy, mobile phones are more and more widely used in our daily life. However, some parents and teachers have different ideas about whether the students should use mobile phones at school.
Some students are for it. They think that it is convenient to contact with parents. Mobile phones will make them more interested in learning so that they can learn more quickly and easily. Some teachers are against it.They think that some students can't control themselves and often play games. What's worse, some students cheat in exams by using mobile phones. Besides, using mobile phones too much does great harm to students' eyes.
In my opinion, I think it is helpful for students to use mobile phones in a right way. Firstly,students can learn more knowledge using mobile phones. At the same time, parents and teachers should do something to help students. Only in this way can mobile phones be of help to their studies. 【解析】 【详解】
本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点,不可遗漏。需在平时积累相关的词汇,写作中注意语义通顺,符合逻辑关系,上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。如but, so, then等。可以适当使用高分句型。 【点睛】
高分句型:I think it is helpful for students to use mobile phones in a right way.我认为正确的方式使用手机对学生是有帮助的。 I think+宾语从句。
It is+形容词 for sb to do sth做某事对某人来说是…的。
5. 近年来雾霾天气在中国许多城市频频发生。雾霾天气引起大家极大的关注。请你用英语写一篇有关雾霾的短文向校刊“英语角”投稿,内容包括: 1. 雾霾的危害 2. 雾霾产生的原因(2个) 3. 应对雾霾的措施(3个) 提示:雾霾 smog poisonous 有毒的
注意:1. 词数110左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3. 开头语已为你写好(不计入总词数)。
In recent years, many cities in China have been hit by smog frequently, which has aroused great concern among people.
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【答案】 In recent years, many cities in China have been hit by smog frequently, which has aroused great concern among people.
Smog has a bad effect on people’s health. Many people, children and the old in particular, suffer from illnesses caused by smog. Consequently, citizens are warned not to go out without wearing masks.
How does it come about? Scientists have found that it is human activity that has caused this. The poisonous matters in the air mainly come as a result of people’s burning coal, driving cars, industry production and so on.
What should we do to stop the situation from worsening? First, cleaner fuels for cars and stricter emission standards for factories are of vital importance. Second, for us individuals, living a green life like going to work or school by public transport is a good choice. Also planting more trees to increase green areas is necessary. I believe every contribution counts. Only if we work together will smog weather disappear completely. 【解析】 【详解】
这篇作文要求我们根据提示来介绍有关雾霾的情况,题目中给出了写作的内容,我们应将这些内容用正确的英语表达出来。首先应注意在短文中要包括题目中给出的所有信息,不能遗漏要点,并注意表达的层次和条理。其次要注意使用正确的时态和人称,通过分析可知,这篇短文应使用一般现在时态,谓语动词用原形,特别要注意谓语动词形式要变化,这是一个写作的难点。最后要注意英语的表达习惯,英语句式与汉语在语序和词性上的使用是不同的,要注意不能逐词翻译,写汉语式的英语。应从句子整体考虑,使用恰当的词汇和句型来表达,语法规范。还应使用一些较好的句型或者短语,增强文章的表现力。
6.书面表达
假如你是李华,你们学校正在进行课堂教学改革,经过一段时间的适应,同学们发现现在的课堂跟以前比较发生了一些变化,请你根据所给提示以“The Changes in Class”为题目,用英语写一篇100词左右的文章,谈谈你的感受和想法,开头和结尾已给出(不计入总词数)。
要求:1.短文应行文连贯、条理清晰、段落分明、书写工整;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名等信息; 3.文章必须包括所提供的全部主要信息,并作适当发挥。
The Changes in Class
Thanks for giving us students a chance to express ourselves about how we study in
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【答案】 The Changes in Class
Thanks for giving us students a chance to express ourselves about how we study in class. I like the class like this.I think it is very interesting and lively. We can tell stories, play games and listen to music.
I think it is open and free. We can study and think by ourselves .We can discuss in groups and show ourselves. We can get more knowledge in this class. The changes in Class are good for us. 【解析】 【详解】
假如你是李华,你们学校正在进行课堂教学改革,经过一段时间的适应,同学们发现现在的课堂跟以前比较发生了一些变化,请你根据所给提示以“The Changes in Class”为题目,用英语写一篇100词左右的文章,谈谈你的感受和想法,开头和结尾已给出(不计入总词数)。
结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时,人称为单数第一人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构,注意一些常见句式的应用,写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系。 【点睛】
本文结构紧凑,语言简练文中运用了一些好的句型:We can study and think by ourselves .We can discuss in groups and show ourselves. We can get more knowledge in this class.等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
7. 书面表达
共享单车(shared bikes)在苏州投入使用以来,给人们带来了诸多便利,受到人们的追捧,改变了人们的出行方式,但同时也遇到了一些挑战,是国民素质的‘“照妖镜”,请你根据表格中信息的提示,给《21世纪英文报》写一篇关于共享单车看法的稿件。 社会现状 自从出现,饱受赞誉。 1.随处可见,出行方便 诸多优势 2.有益健康,减少污染 3.费用不高,负担得起 存在问题 你的观点 1.未及时归还 2.占道挡路 我认为……(考生自拟,至少2点) 注意事项:1.短文须包括表格中所有提示内容,要求语句通顺,意思连贯。 2.表格中“你的观点”一栏用2―3句话展开合理想象。作适当发挥。 3.词数在90个左右,文章的开头部分已给出,不计入总词数。 Shared bikes are becoming more and more popular in our daily life.
【答案】Shared bikes are becoming more and more popular in our daily life. They have won high praise since they appeared.
Shared bikes have brought us many advantages. They can be seen everywhere so that it's easy for us to get around on shared bikes. Also, riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What's more, using shared bikes costs so little that we can afford it. But there are some problems too. Some people can't return shared bikes in time. Sometimes shared bikes take up too much of the road, so they are in our way.
I think we should encourage more people to use shared bikes properly. After all, it's a way of living a green life.
【解析】这篇作文要求我们给《21世纪英文报》投稿,谈一谈自己对共享单车的看法。题目中利用表格的形式给我们列举了短文的主要内容,包括:共享单车的优势;存在的问题
以及你自己对这件事情的看法。前两个内容我们需要根据表格的提示用正确的英语表达,而自己的观点则需要学生们自己发挥想象力,组织语言,并表达出来,要求至少两点。通过审题可知,这篇短文应主要使用一般现在时态,第三人称来叙述,短文可以分成两段或者三段,一个内容一段或前两个内容合到一段。写作时,应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同,不能逐词翻译,而应从句子的整体考虑,简单句、并列句和复合句交叉使用,改变文章句式节奏,使用不同的句式,避免单调。语句之间注意使用恰当的连接成分,使整篇文章意思连贯、表达流畅。
点睛:这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整,包含了题目要求的所有信息。短文分成了四段,第一段引出话题共享单车;第二段讲述了共享单车的一些优点;第三段介绍了一些问题;最后一段作者提出了自己的看法。分段叙述使文章的结构清晰,主题明确,有层次性。其次短文中使用了恰当的时态和人称,文章以第三人称、一般现在时态为主,语法规范,用词准确,句式富于变化。例如They can be seen everywhere so that it's easy for us to get around on shared bikes. Also, riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What's more, using shared bikes costs so little that we can afford it.这几个长句;另外文章中还使用了恰当的连接成分,如Also, What’s more, But, sometimes, After all等等。正确文章行文连贯、语句通顺、表达流畅。
8.假如你叫李华,最近你班里的美国交换生Lucy想要感受中国的传统文化。周末你和父母商议后,打算邀请她去老舍茶馆。你通过微信告知她:要去哪,在那要做什么以及何时何地见面。
提示词语:Laoshe Teahouse, drink tea, Peking Opera, magic shows, gate 提示问题:Where are you going? What will you do there? When and where will you meet?
【答案】Hi, Lucy! I know you like Chinese traditional culture. I want to invite you to Laoshe Teahouse this Saturday morning. We are going to drink tea, watch magic shows, enjoy Peking Opera, and eat Chinese traditional food in Laoshe Teahouse. We can experience Chinese
traditional culture there. Let’s meet at the gate of Laoshe Teahouse at 8:30, OK? See you. 【解析】这是一篇给材料作文,我通过微信告诉Lucy要去哪,在那里要做什么以及何时何地见面。
结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时,人称为第一人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构,注意一些常见句式的应用,比如:I want to……,We are going to……,We can……,Let’s meet at……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系。
点睛:本文结构紧凑,语言简练。开头介绍了我想要邀请你去老舍茶馆,接下来介绍我们去那里做什么,最后指出我们要在何时何地见面。此处want to do sth, invite sb to, let sb do sth, at the gate of等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
9.自信赋予人力量,带给人快乐。拥有自信,人生处处是舞台,生活越来越精彩。 假如你是李华,请你为校刊英语园地“自信助我成长”专栏写一篇短文,谈谈自信的重要性,分享一次使你更加自信的经历,并说说我们如何更加自信。 提示词语:powerful,happy,believe in,keep doing 提示问题:
Why is it important to be confident? What experience made you more confident? How can we become more confident? It's very important to be confident
【答案】It’s very important to be confident. Self-confidence can bring us courage to stick to what we do. So it’s valuable to us.
When I was in Grade 7, once my teacher asked me to make a speech in class. Although I practiced it for many times at home, I still felt nervous and forgot thewords at the beginning of it. Then I breathed deeply and relaxed myself. You can’t believe how happy I was when I recalled the speech and finished it successfully.My teacher thought highly of my performance and I got much encouragement from my classmates. From then on, I have become more and more confident. To build confidence, firstly we need to clearly know about our own advantages and try to develop them. It is the most important that we should put in enough effort to what we do. Then we can finally make it and gain more confidence. 【解析】
本文内容应包含表格中所提供的所有信息。灵活运用各种句式,采用不同的表达方式将各个要点完整地表述出来,注意主次分明,详略得当。语言力求准确,简洁。最后必须认真查验是否有漏写,有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
点睛:这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少,如at the beginning of; know about;make a speech等;When ;Although ;Then ;From then on,等的运用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理;同时语言流畅,内容完整,是一篇不错的范文。
10.书面表达
我校决定让学生轮流打扫厕所,以此作为教育学生的一种方式。 这件事在学生中引 起了强
烈的反响,请你把下列不同意见整理成一篇书面材料,报告给学校。 同意 :1.多数学生是独生子女,不会做事。 2.学生应该学会做艰苦的工作。 3.学会理解和尊重清洁工人的劳动。
不同意:1.很脏,容易使学生生病。 2.不是学生应该做的事情。 3.打扫教室就足够了。
注意:1.短文应包括表中所有内容,可适当发挥,但不要逐字翻译; 2.不少于80词。 生词提示:respect尊重
【答案】A strong argument has taken place among students since our school made students do voluntary labor.
Some students think it is a good way of education. Now most families have only one child. They never do hard work. To do voluntary labor is a good chance for them to learn how to do difficult work. It can also help them understand and respect the cleaners.
But others have different points. They think it is easy for them to get sick. They don’t think it is students'jobs. Cleaning the classroom every day is enough. 【解析】 【详解】
阅读题干要求,这是一篇看法类的作文,那么首先得点明讨论的话题,然后分别写出不同人群对此事的看法,时态以一般现在时为主。
重点词汇及短语:argument争论;take place发生;among(三者或三者以上)之间;a good chance for sb对某人来说是个好机会;help sb do sth帮助某人做某事;get sick生病。 亮点句型:
(1)A strong argument has taken place among students since our school made students do voluntary labor. 自从我们学校让学生做自愿劳动以来,在学生中发生了一场激烈的争论。现在完成时(have/has+done)。
(2)To do voluntary labor is a good chance for them to learn how to do difficult work. 做义务劳动是他们学习如何做困难工作的好机会。动词不定式作主语,谓语动词用单数,疑问词+to do。
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